Ode to Sloopy [Sloopy] (Draft 5)

Ode to Sloopy (Sloopy) (Draft 5)

If my neighborhood is blessed,
why must there be
so many places without joy?

I am not fulfilled with
just my toys. Joyce dear,

can I give you my map
to find me?

Joyce you’ve known the song so
don’t fall off the mountain;
hang on to an edge,
hang on to a love to be.

Oh baby I don’t know why
your Daddy puts you down
and why you must stay with cockroaches
in your part of town

Oh baby, can you cross the border
’cause there’d be no disorder
if you’d wait for me,
only wait for me

I know there’s a cliff
where everyone dis’s you

But baby don’t fall;
I’ve got the rockin’ gear
and the pinions of a mountain climb

I know you’re on a cliff, but
hang on

I will hoist you up to God, and
maybe He will share you with me

because I want to save you, and
my rescue ropes are of joy. We will

cross the border
and climb a better mountain
beyond outrageous stones
those devils throw

How can they know
your kind heart
if they’d be mocking birds.

Let me sing to you of
sweet rescue, because
don’t we both need to
climb to a heaven we need
so desperately

I think we are good
to hang on for love

because never would I
want you to be anywhere
but on my street if
you love me, or

even if you don’t.

— Douglas Gilbert

2 thoughts on “Ode to Sloopy [Sloopy] (Draft 5)

  1. I love it when you sing to me, so beautiful the way your words dance in my mind. I think you may be the only man I’ve ever really shown my heart to but that’s just fine with me because I wouldn’t want to give my heart to just anyone…especially someone who throws stones and would mock birds. Oh, it’s funny that you’d mention mocking birds because i have a mockingbird pair who have been coming to my suet block feeder lately. But anyway (i always tend to drift off-subject) i think we are good and i know that God can see if a heart is kind and knows true intentions. I like all the changes you made…

    1. Thank you. I haven’t seen many beating hearts and so I’m no expert, but the chambers of yours seems a fine lub-dub…

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