Cute (Draft 1)

Cute (Draft 1)

She is so cute
when she loves the cute,
sends me

twelve wild turkeys in the road
on a camera phone

and a mama deer with 3 little spotted babies

and she is so cute
so caring that

I bet she’ll walk between lightning strokes
and dodge the rain for me
as if we could be between the drops

I think when the
sycamore tree fell down,
it was a sign, because

she thought it was cute
when I picked up a twig
and brushed the sky

— Douglas Gilbert

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2 thoughts on “Cute (Draft 1)

  1. I love it! This made my day and left me with a big much needed smile. You are so awesome, I’d walk between the lightning strikes and dodge the rain for you. The turkeys and deer were so cute, it’s always kind of exciting when you run into cute creatures when you just happen to be out and not expecting it – feels kind of like a surprise. I love the ending, you turned the sycamore tree falling into a positive thing with your special way with words…the way you picked up a twig and brushed the sky…

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