Tame Tale (Draft 1)

Tame Tale (Draft 1)

Tell me why you prance;
didn’t want to ride you

Would rather you lift off into space
dance with cosmic curiosity, tell me
that the connected stars will approve if

with four feet together
we can gallop
with unbridled love

— Douglas Gilbert

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2 thoughts on “Tame Tale (Draft 1)

  1. ahh..gallop with unbridled love…what a nice ending. I also love the dance with cosmic curiosity and I’m positive that the connected stars will approve. It’s great, i love it. started my morning off with a smile. You and coffee are always the perfect ingredients for a good start to the day…

    1. Thanks very much. Hmm, a few things are unclear maybe. I’m going to try another draft. But I’m so glad you could enjoy this one.

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